Hmm. This one's pretty cute, kinda funny, but the ending... I don't want to spoil it, but two of those tags (the tags will spoil it, by the way) don't really belong together. Not at all. Don't they sell condoms in Japan, fuck... It's nothing too bad, just when it gets into, uh, multiple generations it becomes a problem.
Added some new tags. 'Pee', with the money shot. I cannot believe we haven't seen that one yet. Did I miss it? Those particular pages have fluids of all sorts flying about in defiance of all physical laws, pretty easy mistake. 'It hurts', it's her first time, is all. And 'impreg' at the very end there. Well, I guess the actual impregnation happens earlier, or maybe somewhere in between. It doesn't really matter but blacked out text is fun lol. The 'anal' and 'boobs' tags are just a two page fantasy, so don't get your hopes up for that,
Would a 'loli-mama' tag be misleading? They never get any, but damn.
